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Your lines are clean, good coloring, funny ending. Only thing you gotta work on is your timing and spacing !

I Thought it was gonna be a really short and dumb thing, but heh you did completely the opposite, it is so full of truths !!!!!!!!!!! D: anyways, entertaining :)

HAahahahah 10/10

1 - Trabaja anatomia y proporciones un poco mas
2 - Trabaja el spacing y el timing en la animacion
3 - Mejora un poco mas las lineas
4 - Haz que el audio se escuche mas claro.

alekspit responds:

calma amigo tranquilizate, esto no es un pedido de trabajo, esto solo lo hago por diversion; jajajaja.

geez, this is some amazing stuff !

omg that was amazing

Good backgrounds, good use of limited animation, good timing

oh wow, this was surpisingly funny :o neat- o

pretty amazing ! looks like a lot of work ! i love watching stuff like this, good story too. My only advice (you dont have to take it lol, but yeah) calculate the spacing between drawings, when the character blinked you drew an even spacing, same space between frames also when the character moved. Either way, its a 5, you were nt lazy and i love that.

hilarious, simple animation that really worked for its porpuse, god, i loved this ! very funny

Mangu con SSSSalami!

Francis Florencio @francisyfl

Age 31, Male

animator - director

Dominican Republic

Joined on 1/10/11

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